feedback on my portfolio:

[archspace]

Sonic Sky, Thank you for your comments. Yes I agree with you I should go into more details on the commentary. That might also help to explain more to the viewer what is going on in each of these slides. They are not in any particular order, I simply clicked on these photos in my folder to put together a slideshow to demostrate the Flash Portfolio.



Thank you
Anthony

[Stuartsjaw]

this is my first post, so hello to everyone

but i see this from two points of view, i looked at the portfolio and it seemed to me to be really incomplete, not enough writing, or explination about why he was making a model for 70 hours or whatever. so to be fair, the repliers comments were fair, but didnt give me advice for improvement, it more or less told him his opinion.

i would: set about create 2 parts, a gallery section, showing work in progress, design sketches and other drawings/renders images. and a finals section, for final stuff, just set it out a bit clearer.. i didnt know what i was looking for... also more explination on what you setting about doing instead of 'model took me 70 hours' etc... just adds more depth to it, and shows that you are trying to put your point of view accross


i really like your trees

[wonotusix]

archspace,
welll can't comment on your models, (honestly i could have never done that ).
as for your portfolio you know the interface is pretty cool. i think you should have a non rectangular frame for the photos instead of the plain rectangular( if flash permits it... you know maybe tilted to the angle of your texts .... MAYBE or i suggest you take a different font and make a formal one).
anyway it's a nice work and a great portfolio.

regards
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